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Nicole is 24% done
Yep, Alessi's eyes are blue again. Good job, Cameron. Why is your writing sometimes so spot on, and others feels like a first draft of fanfiction??
— Nov 01, 2022 08:47PM
Just One Summer (Castleton Hearts Book 7)

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Nicole
Nicole is 19% done
Okay, confused. First, Alessi has 'light-denim' eyes, which I think is a not-too-hard to decipher code for blue; but then they're brown the next time H is thinking about them. And the kid, Preston. Isn't he like, 10?? But the father I read, the younger he speaks. Either he is going through rapid speech regression, or CM forgot how old she wrote him as at first. Either way, I'm seeing some inconsistencies....
— Nov 01, 2022 09:48AM
Just One Summer (Castleton Hearts Book 7)


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