Miggins (Hobbit Hole Books)’s Reviews > The Monsters We Feed > Status Update
Miggins (Hobbit Hole Books)
is 4% done
A solid start, cracking first line. Does have a slight different feel to We Break Immortals, and at this stage i am feeling it could've done with a little tighter editing in the prose, BUT i love Thomas' world and i trust in him to deliver!
— Nov 03, 2022 01:42PM
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Miggins (Hobbit Hole Books)
is 10% done
The 1st chapter had a great ending couple of lines. Struggling to visualise some aspects, the prose feels different to we break immortals. But the characters make it. We'll see how this goes!
— Nov 03, 2022 03:24PM
