Keba’s Reviews > Vampire's Kiss > Status Update

Okay I’ve decided to DNF it. I just finished chapter 9 and I’m just not interested in seeing how it ends. The story doesn’t seem cohesive to me and it’s hard to read. The main character also doesn’t make any sense. How are you the daughter of a mafia leader and can’t defend yourself? She hated the family business in the beginning but 8 months later she’s running it? This story just wasn’t for me.

So 8 months have gone by and she’s a completely different person?

Is it just me, or was most of chapter 7 unnecessary?