Lydia’s Reviews > Princess and the Player > Status Update
Lydia
is 40% done
I really liked the start of this, how they met and their first time, but after that the story has slowed down, they are more apart than they are together, there is a LOT of past ex drama for both of them, and a lot of back story on both that is being given in drips and drabs, but just on them and not on their exes who keep showing up. So at this point it is not a very fun read
— Nov 09, 2022 09:58AM
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Lydia
is 85% done
She FINALLY tells him about the baby b/c she is FORCED to, I really don't think it would have happened any other way, she would have had a belly and gone into labor and hid until that kid was 8 y/o before she would have told him. SOOOOO frustrating. anyways I have 1hr, 22min left in the book by the time she tells him
— Nov 09, 2022 02:34PM
Lydia
is 60% done
Angst fest, too many characters, Fran spends WAY too much time with other people. Normally I like there to be more to the story, but the main couple barely spend time together. Her heart is hard and doesn't want a guy, his is damaged and doesn't want permanent. Not sure how these two are actually going to end up together, b/c they don't want to be together, and she still has not told him about the baby
— Nov 09, 2022 11:47AM
Lydia
is 50% done
There are a lot of side stories with the minor characters that I feel like I've missed something, CeCe and now doing the Pritty Woman thing with a client, and then Brogan, who has not had much in the story but I'm sure will have some sort of large side quest as well. It is just too much for this basically standalone to hold and do well
— Nov 09, 2022 10:52AM
