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Generally enjoying this for what it is but
1. Could really do with tighter editing—the blow by blow account is a bit disordered and some of this really feels like scattered thoughts
2. I feel like a lot of it is quite vague in the analysis/recommendations; the latter I can understand omission of as this is more reflective, but the analysis feels kinda shallow
— Nov 27, 2022 03:05PM
1. Could really do with tighter editing—the blow by blow account is a bit disordered and some of this really feels like scattered thoughts
2. I feel like a lot of it is quite vague in the analysis/recommendations; the latter I can understand omission of as this is more reflective, but the analysis feels kinda shallow

