Yas’s Reviews > The Magic of Meadowbrooke: A Novel of Darcy and the Bennets > Status Update
Yas
is 12% done
So far, it is difficult to convince myself to keep on reading. The reviews are good, and maybe the core of the story is interesting and a good idea. But, the tone seemed wrong. The dialogues are stilted, I find them somewhat tedious. There are too many descriptions making no sense. I will keep reading but I am getting annoyed at all the impossibilities as well as Mr D and EB’s OOC behaviours.
— Nov 24, 2022 10:33PM
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Yas
is 76% done
I must admit I have skipped forward.
And to be honest, Can-Do-No-Wrong-Perfect-Elizabeth is getting on my last nerve...
But I'll carry-on reading to the end
— Nov 28, 2022 03:09PM
And to be honest, Can-Do-No-Wrong-Perfect-Elizabeth is getting on my last nerve...
But I'll carry-on reading to the end
Yas
is 76% done
I must admit I have skipped forward.
And to be honest, Can-Do-No-Wrong-Perfect-Elizabeth is getting on my last nerve...
But I'll carry-on reading to the end
— Nov 26, 2022 04:38PM
And to be honest, Can-Do-No-Wrong-Perfect-Elizabeth is getting on my last nerve...
But I'll carry-on reading to the end

