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Ok one thing I don't really get is why these kids are fighting the Yokai so hard without any concept of where they are coming from?

Even in my country where we don't really do myths, we have some and tell those to our children. These kids are just killing 'monsters' as if they never heard of the good ones. That's weird right? Where are their bed time stories? Or even the modern ones?
Nov 25, 2022 08:51AM
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Also cool for having some conversations Irish (Gaelic?) BUT I DON'T SPEAK IT. So what we have this cool looking dude but unrecognisable as some mythological creature. Why should I care about this scene? For all I know the dad is haggling about the price of a BJ.
Dec 03, 2022 05:42AM
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😮 I'm sorry what? The last page of chapter 16 is not okay. That feels very very yucky. One page she is drawn as a normal kid and now like a pin-up girl? I like those but they clearly portray women.

I hate this. The disjointed way of drawing. I you want sexy teenagers by all means draw that but stop switching. It really creeps me out.
Dec 03, 2022 05:39AM
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😳 the other kids keep on being ditched! Why would they ever want to stay with each other? Am I supposed to believe in the Power of Friendship?
Dec 03, 2022 05:32AM
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*sigh* I was really hoping for not some female specific slurs at inappropriate times. 'Spider whore'? Really? She's older than dirt and never tried to seduce anyone while you knew her. Not the moment.
Dec 03, 2022 05:29AM
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I think what I dislike the most in this story is that the kids seem very gung-ho on murdering other beings... Bit like lord of the flies. Which wasn't trying to say that is human nature.
Dec 03, 2022 05:14AM
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