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Kathy
Kathy is 50% done
The story is pretty good but the punctuation and writing style are distracting and detract from the story. And chapter 4 goes on and on and on. Like too many modern book, this desperately cried out for a good editor.
Nov 28, 2022 10:29PM
Properties of Thirst

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