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This is very dry so far. It's not very engaging and I'm struggling to keep the kids interested - which isn't surprising as I'm bored.

There is a lot of info dumping so far - we are two chapters down. Nothing has really happened and it's a lot of every day activities that aren't at the moment helping to draw one into the story.

Did I mention the writing style is very dry? Monotone? Just not great for kids.
Dec 03, 2022 12:34PM
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