Cindy’s Reviews > Cafe Au Lait > Status Update

Thank you for the gift. I'm old so I get annoyed if people overuse new jargon. I think"sheep" Have yr own mind. I would be annoyed if all the characters "clocked" details.Where as non police, military characters would simply see or notice. The same goes for"marked" Civilian characters would not mark a detail. Probaby just see it or notice. Sadly, false feeling details can pull the reader out of the story