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I get the emptiness she feels, but she doesn’t want him to leave and he’s been unconscious the entire she’s been around him so far. More to attraction than looks.

— Dec 06, 2022 10:57PM

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Midniteillusion is on page 94 of 480

A Fairytale Christmas review: 2 stars
I liked Nan well enough and loved Clara, they had a great relationship, but Will fell flat as did the romance between he and Nan.
Nan met and fell in love with Will while he was unconscious. Will doesn’t love Nan until the very end, which is fine since it’s a short overlap but he only seems to love her because the house keeper tells him to.

— Jan 07, 2023 01:41AM

Midniteillusion is on page 75 of 480

Whoa....
Literally 4-5 pages ago Clara was calling her dada a snowman and now when Nan asks Clara if she’s ever built one Clara doesn’t know what it is. Poor editing here.

— Jan 07, 2023 01:12AM

Midniteillusion is on page 70 of 480

Did the author say “snow cream” when he meant ice cream?

— Jan 07, 2023 01:11AM

Midniteillusion is on page 65 of 480

They’re all a little cringe. Why would Gertie and Jake winter NaN to marry a man who doesn’t love her?

— Jan 03, 2023 11:29PM

Midniteillusion is on page 45 of 480

This story is a little dated, doesn’t seem to have depth.

— Dec 11, 2022 11:38PM