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It starts off with Misty mentioning her fave purple sneakers and it takes me back to the good ol' days on quizlet or fanfic.net when young writers would describe the stuff they actually owned as the main character's. I'm being critical af but it's giving tween's first story.
I'm getting way too much telling instead of showing, but I love Misty's honest complaints on predatory men. PREACH
— Dec 11, 2022 11:26AM
I'm getting way too much telling instead of showing, but I love Misty's honest complaints on predatory men. PREACH
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The world building is great. The weapons, the brothers' unique abilities, the monarchy and tech is amazing and I wasn't expecting this total quality regarding the actual scifi elements. Usually it takes a backseat to romance, but not here. Only problem is that I'm getting bored lol
And Sephir smirks too much. We get it: you're edgy and troubled. Misty's already making dumb decisions, but imma give her a break for now
— Dec 12, 2022 04:02PM
And Sephir smirks too much. We get it: you're edgy and troubled. Misty's already making dumb decisions, but imma give her a break for now
