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Susan
Susan is 18% done
I am enjoying the story, HOWEVER, there are countless errors. Lots of commas used incorrectly or not at all. Lots of wrong words or wrong tenses. It sucks me out of the story every time I have to reread a section because of the poor editing.

Please, I beg of this author - get a better editor for any future projects. I am getting frustrated to the point that I just want to abandon this.
Dec 12, 2022 03:48PM
The Melody of Longbourn (The McKnight Family Saga #1)

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Susan
Susan is 20% done
I am not marking every mistake, but oh Lord. It’s like the author vomited commas.
Dec 12, 2022 04:55PM
The Melody of Longbourn (The McKnight Family Saga #1)


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