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Amber is 63% done
So far I have suspended belief to over capacity. This story is too entrenched in reality that the missing elements (or wrong ones) stick out too much. The pacing is fine, but every time I expect to like a character it swaps to the other of the main two. What began as a deep story of pain, love, gaming, and relationships has turned septic. Maybe the last half will redeem itself.
Dec 13, 2022 07:19PM
Tomorrow, and Tomorrow, and Tomorrow

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Amber is 74% done
Hmmm... A lot of inconsistencies and plot holes... I gave a bad feeling anout the redt of this one.
Dec 16, 2022 12:02AM
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