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I hope that in the succeeding books, an editor is hired to polish it, to make it more cohesive, and reduce the ramblings.
The premise of this series is intriguing enough that I may continue reading it.
Ehh, I have a bad record on series though.
— Dec 17, 2022 08:56AM
The premise of this series is intriguing enough that I may continue reading it.
Ehh, I have a bad record on series though.
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Author tries hard to be poetic but falls flat.
"But the traitorous tear that falls from my eye tells a different story as it lands on my lip. It brines my happiness and rinses the smile away, leaving a bitter taste in my mouth."
I thought brine is only associated with food.
On top of it, too many sentences starts with conjunction words.
— Dec 17, 2022 08:47AM
"But the traitorous tear that falls from my eye tells a different story as it lands on my lip. It brines my happiness and rinses the smile away, leaving a bitter taste in my mouth."
I thought brine is only associated with food.
On top of it, too many sentences starts with conjunction words.
