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Mel B.
is 59% done
Introducing unnecessary new characters more than halfway through the book. This book should be 400 pages, not 800.
— Dec 22, 2022 02:14PM
Mel B.
is 38% done
Both riveting and slogging. I could do with following half as many characters.
— Dec 17, 2022 12:05PM