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Murky/weak beginning. We're told about twins that MC observes at school, though we don't have a scene with MC interacting with them. Skips to a detailed description of what MC looks like (strange colour changing purple/neon eyes, and her backstory).
Action finally starts at 2% where she finds older man covered in blood.
— Jan 03, 2023 12:35AM
Action finally starts at 2% where she finds older man covered in blood.
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Cogito_ergo_sum
is 2% done
Murky/weak beginning. We're told about the Japanese exchange student twins that MC observes at school, though we don't have a scene with MC interacting with them. Skips to a detailed mirror description of what MC looks like (strange colour changing purple/neon eyes, and her backstory).
Action finally starts at 2% where she finds older man covered in blood.Then we finally meet Rio. -Confusing narration.
— Jan 03, 2023 01:03AM
Action finally starts at 2% where she finds older man covered in blood.Then we finally meet Rio. -Confusing narration.
