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Te overuse of the past perfect tense at the beginning (during big info dumps) was clunky and really annoying and nearly caused a DNF. But I pushed through and it has improved. The story plays out a bit like a D&D tournament module, which is fine. Overall, I'm enjoying it.
Jan 03, 2023 07:54AM
The Immortality Thief (The Kystrom Chronicles, #1)

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