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This is dragging longer than necessary. Here's an example:
We were eating corn dogs in my car, parked at the Sonic Drive-In, where the carhops were roller skates and brought the food to your car on trays. (114)
This is sufficient detail for establishing the scenery and context for this fast food chain. It's the next two lines that I question their inclusion in the text (other than to make this book longer).
— Jan 08, 2023 08:22AM
We were eating corn dogs in my car, parked at the Sonic Drive-In, where the carhops were roller skates and brought the food to your car on trays. (114)
This is sufficient detail for establishing the scenery and context for this fast food chain. It's the next two lines that I question their inclusion in the text (other than to make this book longer).
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