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Crystal
is 41% done
Not understanding if omegas are so precious and rare, why are they torturing her so much? Why did they put the brother in heat and give him to the alphas? I thought the sister was in heat, and it lasts 4 days. What happened to that? Just seems super counterproductive if this society needs omegas to have kids to not torture her smh
— Jan 11, 2023 09:40AM
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Crystal
is 41% done
The brothers story is interesting. The sisters torture seems a bit too much. Perhaps it will be explained but it doesn’t make any sense. The story started off really interesting, but the way they are taken comes out the blue considering the number of safeguards they have. Why now all of a sudden have they been found? Again maybe it will be discussed but I wish there were better world building.
— Jan 11, 2023 09:38AM
