Christina Yorke’s Reviews > Rio Los Angeles > Status Update

I recieved this novel via Goodreads, Luminare Press and author Diego Kent, in return for an honest review. At 70% completed I find myself unconnected to the characters. I would say character building and more interaction between characters would help.
In addition, there are histories I have heard of but do not know, people who just randomly pop into the story, and a lot of "sayings" and boat knowledge.