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is 99% done
“Sterling frowned but his grin was visible beneath his beard.” Then what did he frown with?
— Jan 26, 2023 09:44AM
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Camille
is 95% done
I’ve got 38 minutes left in this one so I’m just guessing at the percentage. But I’ve got to say this: ugh. The writing annoys me a lot. “His brain shattered.” No, it actually didn’t. Did it get hit? No. Did he have a psychological break? Nope. He’s just freaked out. I don’t know why but it just annoys me so much. That’s just one example of many. It’s a thriller but overly dramatic. 🙄
— Jan 25, 2023 05:23AM
