kimberly_rose’s Reviews > Idriel's Sin > Status Update

3.5 stars complicated and fascinating, but needs a bit of chopping block editing.

Really really awesome world building. Captivating characters. But sometimes the mystery is just a tad too complicated. I dunna like war sagas. Also, the sex/lust healing is going on a bit too long....

Oh my, this is DELICIOUS. Angst heaven.

Kinda startling to change pov mid scene using the three asterisk indicator (* * *) method, but yanno what, it works: it's early in the story, so I'm open to change; the scene is exciting and tense--I want to know what each character is thinking; and it's comprehensively simple and quick.

Idriel getting beat up, unable to defedn himself? God how those hurt scenes in hurt/comfort stories affect me. *shivers*

Just arrived home from work, it's 9:44 pm and I have my rye and root beer in my hand, my soup and cheese warming, and a new book! Cats are here too. I love this. And the book too! So far, it's promising themes I seek out and a writing style that captivates me. Could do with a tad of editing: "In his dream, he stood in the heavenly court, bound and kneeling." How does one both stand AND kneel? Lol.