Status Updates From Idriel's Sin

OH GOD, I cannot breathe.

3.5 stars complicated and fascinating, but needs a bit of chopping block editing.

Really really awesome world building. Captivating characters. But sometimes the mystery is just a tad too complicated. I dunna like war sagas. Also, the sex/lust healing is going on a bit too long....

Oh my, this is DELICIOUS. Angst heaven.

*heart clenches*

Kinda startling to change pov mid scene using the three asterisk indicator (* * *) method, but yanno what, it works: it's early in the story, so I'm open to change; the scene is exciting and tense--I want to know what each character is thinking; and it's comprehensively simple and quick.

Idriel getting beat up, unable to defedn himself? God how those hurt scenes in hurt/comfort stories affect me. *shivers*

Just arrived home from work, it's 9:44 pm and I have my rye and root beer in my hand, my soup and cheese warming, and a new book! Cats are here too. I love this. And the book too! So far, it's promising themes I seek out and a writing style that captivates me. Could do with a tad of editing: "In his dream, he stood in the heavenly court, bound and kneeling." How does one both stand AND kneel? Lol.

Poor Idriel, gotta let a demon into his secret garden to stay alive. This is actually a matter of life and death, not like you, Lilly. Skank.

OMG, so much going on with my babies!

My poor lovers... Want to wait and finish this tomorrow. Make it last. It's just that good. :)

Idriel goes to Hell. Who'll save him now? This isn't right...

Too tired to read any more tonight, but this story is haunting...

'Eligor couldn't help but smile back.' Me neither! Loving this book. :)

Before I start reading tonight, I want to say I've been looking forward to this all day. Tells you how much I'm enjoying this story!

Oh Idriel, you're breaking my heart! Poor lovely angel...

I need some popcorn, Twizzlers, gummi bears or something...

Love it so far! I just can't stop reading although I should sit down and study :/ Can't wait to read about what really happened with Idriel's comrades and I'm intrigued by Eligor and his past...