madeline’s Reviews > Ocean's Echo > Status Update

Tennal has fallen unconscious for days at a time so many times and Surit can't even manage a "I was worried about you" or "I thought you weren't going to make it this time." Holy Fuck just Fucking Talk stop fucking writing pages about waves and saltwater and give me some goddamn dialogue for fucks sake.

I have a lot of mixed feelings about how Maxwell's metaphors for minds but I'm starting to get pissed off by how much every character is just ignoring their emotions, to the point where its not even a second thought for Maxwell to just pretend everyone's perfectly fine, move on, next question, after something traumatic happens.

I love these boys but I have no fucking clue what's happening in space