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is 60% done
This book is not holding my interest. The storyline is one I would typically enjoy. I think I'm struggling with the writing. There is way too much "telling" in this story. A LOT of background that most readers likely already know. A LOT of saying what the character is feeling when feelings are already implied in the action.
— Feb 04, 2023 09:44PM
