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Ai caramba! The author is commiting my hated peeve - repetition. Brave and Bravery used 14!!! times in 3.5 pages, 4 times in 7-line paragraph alone! There is such thing as a thesaurus. Plodding and tedious. 5*ratings? No way!!!
— Feb 09, 2015 06:22PM
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