Janice’s Reviews > The Girl with the Louding Voice > Status Update

I have a problem when I have to think hard to make sense of the writing. It goes too slow and I get frustrated. I know the author is trying to recreate a Nigerian speech pattern, but I may not be able to take it.
For example: “A firefly is the eyesballs of a angel. That one be bringing a message of moneys to us. I didn’t sure what message that firefly was wanting to bring, but I knowed it no money.”