Sara Luck’s Reviews > Unable to Resist > Status Update

Honestly the book should have ended already. They found her fathers killer, but now we move to another issue...Lauren. Dear god, there is WAAAAAAY too much going on in this book. I think the author should have stuck to one or two of the little mysteries and expounded on those.

So far, and this is sad because it's the beginning of the book, I absolutely hate the writing style. Hopefully I will get into the flow and not notice how it goes from blow by blow action first person -as if it it happening as we go along to more of a storytelling feel of second person and back again. Technically it's still all first person, but the context changes back and forth frequently. Yuck.