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Pamela
is 55% done
This author needs to be more careful of the etymology of the words they use in a fantasy world entirely made up. When they use words related to Earth, and not the fantasy world, it pulls you right out of the story.
Also, I'm still salty about the ridiculous use of "male" and "female" as nouns.
— Feb 12, 2023 08:21AM
Also, I'm still salty about the ridiculous use of "male" and "female" as nouns.
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Pamela
is 40% done
The fact this author finds it acceptable to address characters as simply "males" or "females", tells me they don't comprehend these are adjectives needing a noun, and they can't be used on their own because it's just grammatically wrong, not to mention culturally inappropriate. It takes me right out of the story.
— Feb 06, 2023 10:48AM