Elithanathile’s Reviews > Messy Love > Status Update

// 👍🏻👍🏻!!

// For someone as subliminally woke and preachy as this author obnoxiously is, I’m surprised that she didn’t pick up on the fucking nuances of the word normal or its connotations!! Her describing a relationship as normal is incredibly fucking ironic and hypocritical!! Why not just describe that relationship as something real and stay away from the word normal?! Man is this author obnoxious!!

// I get the Jonathan had a lot of hardships with his father but you know what, a lot of people have difficulties and challenges and hardships and tragedies happening to them!! At some point you need to take responsibility for the things that happened to you that are in your control … and seeing his relationships with everybody, Jonathan is the problem now!! Jonathan is just so fucking incredibly obnoxious!!!

// This author has become a really shitty author!! It’s been happening for a while now!!

// This author uses words to describe things in moments and all it does is sound disjointed and disingenuous and unnatural and cumbersome!! She uses words that are very recent modern colloquialisms and she uses them in weird contexts, to the point where she just comes across as sounding like a major fucking ignorant idiot!! She doesn’t sound hip, or cool, or edgy, she just sounds like a massive twat!!

// The internal monologues are getting so fucking annoying!! I just want to yell at the author to stop talking to us for fuck’s sake, have the main characters talk to each other, have the characters talk to each other!! Each main character is telling us how they feel internally, but nobody’s actually telling anyone anything!! I never realized this author was so fucking obnoxious!!

// What the fuck is this author doing?! We are almost at 60% and nothing has really happened yet!!

/ I have no idea how this author does it!! She turns a topic that is so incredibly intriguing and turns it into something that is so incredibly boring and juvenile sounding!! I don’t think this author knows how to write anything that doesn’t sound immature anymore!!

// I’m really annoyed that they cancelled their day of getting together and just being best friends!! I get that when you have a significant other things change in a sense, but they never ever ever shed, because best friends are just as fucking important, if not more so!! Danny and Elijah should absolutely keep their best friend days consistent and frequent!!

I’m getting really fucking tired of seeing so much of this author in this book!!
She has absolutely zero capabilities of butting out of her own books and the tells are so obvious because they are in every fucking book, and it’s really fucking obnoxious and offputting and aggravating, and at this point repulsive!!
She forces herself on every MC and it’s incredibly obnoxious!! She really fucking pisses me off!!