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Laura
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And now we have the requisite "jolt of electricity" line that's beyond overused in so many contemporary romance novels. I'm seeing a flounce happening very soon. #SkimmingForQuotationMarks
— Feb 22, 2015 02:07PM
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Laura
is on page 47 of 237
Why is "Commonwealth Avenue" name-dropped so much? By this point in the story we know who Teagan is & where he lives. Why spell it out to us, again, that he's on "Commonwealth Avenue" as if there's a royalty payment for every time it's mentioned?
— Feb 22, 2015 01:35PM
