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Crystal
Crystal is 63% done
Someone has attempted to take your life and the police question you, but you have no idea who would want to harm you. Despite your mother openly telling you she will take the company back one way or another and has been physically violent and threatened you. Your ex has threatened your life, choked you, tried to drown you, and continues to threaten you if you don’t leave. You mention nothing to the police.?
Feb 21, 2023 07:18PM
Brutal King (Ravenwood Elites #1)

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Crystal
Crystal is 93% done
“I burst into tears again. I cannot believe he just did this to me after knowing how much this meant to me from the beginning. He really doesn’t care about anything that concerns me. He’s just a coldhearted bastard.”

So what made you come to that conclusion? When he strangled you, r you? Let his friends gr you while you were drugged? Burned down your treehouse? Which part? Is she a moron? She’s 22?
Feb 21, 2023 08:35PM
Brutal King (Ravenwood Elites #1)


Crystal
Crystal is 57% done
“If you could all shut up, I’ll gladly answer any questions you may have along with Mr. Carson.” It goes quiet in an instant. That probably wasn’t the best or professional way to get them to shut up, but right now I can’t bring myself to care. I’m ready to get this over with.”You’re a ceo of a billion $ company and this is how you speak at a press conference? Why wouldn’t pr make the announcement
Feb 21, 2023 06:54PM
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Crystal
Crystal is 52% done
I would love a word count for the word “whore”. These adults sound like 12 year olds throwing insults. There is no way in the hell this girl should be a ceo of anyones company. I actually loathe each and every character. She’s an idiot and he’s an idiot. The. End.
Feb 21, 2023 06:33PM
Brutal King (Ravenwood Elites #1)


Crystal
Crystal is 43% done
Things are getting repetitive. Why wouldn’t she have told him she was drugged and doesn’t remember anything. When he continues to tell her she cheated on him, all she does is just blow it off. This is getting to the point of pain this miscommunication plot device. SMH
Feb 21, 2023 06:04PM
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Crystal
Crystal is 34% done
Also clearly the mom is having an affair with masons dad. I mean why would you wonder who your mom was speaking to? Clearly someone who lives there. That’s not a mystery. They likely plotted to off the dad the mom inherit the company and give it to the kings. Mr king clearly payed her friends to drug her and see it up to look like she cheated. Why she never told mason she was just released from the hospital?!
Feb 20, 2023 07:41PM
Brutal King (Ravenwood Elites #1)


Crystal
Crystal is 34% done
So I keep looking at the percentage bc I feel like I already have the story figured out at 30%. Idk I could be wrong but winter has to be the most dim witted idiot if she can’t already figure out what’s happening. Clearly her mother likely tried to have her dad killed. I’m assuming the dad isn’t actually dead? Idk I think in one of the later books the dad faked his death bc he knew
Feb 20, 2023 07:40PM
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Crystal
Crystal is 34% done
Hmmmm I’m not sure I like the inner monologue. Everything is so hyperbolic. Of course she is 22 and now a billionaire. I mean why not? Of course he is the most amazing beautiful specimen of a man and they had sex multiple times that she enjoyed even being a virgin. I mean, hey…. Why not?! Lol
Feb 20, 2023 07:37PM
Brutal King (Ravenwood Elites #1)


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