♥Xeni♥’s Reviews > The Last Celtic Witch > Status Update
♥Xeni♥
is on page 23 of 150
Okay, now I am starting to get irritated. Wrong tense used in passage is just horrid. That, and, the sex scene was a bit over the top, too fast and really really cliche. But I am enjoying the story without the erotica, so I will try and ignore it's flaws for now.
— May 05, 2011 04:58PM
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♥Xeni♥
is on page 57 of 150
Yeah, okay, I thought I could finish this... but oh my gosh is it corny and annoying and just so obviously badly written that it's not even worth the plot to stick around. Maybe another night in the future...
— May 18, 2011 05:52PM
♥Xeni♥
is on page 55 of 150
yeah, mediocre story. I suppose I might as well finish it though... it reads fast and I'm already halfway done. Meh, though.
— May 05, 2011 05:23PM
♥Xeni♥
is on page 43 of 150
Plot twists... so predictable. I don't think I'll last much longer. Great story idea... really really lousy execution.
— May 05, 2011 05:14PM
♥Xeni♥
is on page 15 of 150
A fair beginning to this short tale. I'm quite enamored already!
— May 05, 2011 04:50PM
