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oh no, the author just added a cartel in the plot and this has officially jumped the shark. Authors need to stay away from cartels, period.
— Mar 11, 2023 01:17AM
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“So, Morales really isn’t the head of some cartel?” “Nope. That was just to make it super fun and exciting for you.
— Mar 11, 2023 09:14AM
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It is believable Max would get involved with the cartels via drug running but it's this ot1hwr business I'm raising my eyebrows at
— Mar 11, 2023 01:20AM
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*Days
And it's no where near as extreme as 120 Days, but I do admire the pace & escalation
— Mar 10, 2023 06:43PM
And it's no where near as extreme as 120 Days, but I do admire the pace & escalation
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This actually reminds me of 120 Day of Sodom in how this escalates
— Mar 10, 2023 06:42PM
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Anyone looking in could have easily mistaken this for lovemaking, but Crane recognized and accepted it for what it was. It was a defence mechanism. A coping strategy. A stalling technique. A cry for help. Crane sighed. Then why does it feel like love?
— Mar 10, 2023 06:13PM
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“I got distracted,” he said weakly. “You think?” Max rasped, glowering at him as he sat there hunched over, trying to catch his breath. Crane realized something and frowned. “You could have used your teeth.” Instantly, Max’s cheeks dimpled in a bright grin 💀
— Mar 10, 2023 05:58PM
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but, that was the problem, wasn’t it? Max being wired any other way wouldn’t be Max, and Crane would never have been attracted to him in the first place and thus wouldn’t be here, on the run in a foreign country with a price on his head, his dick lodged deep in Max’s throat while he did mental gymnastics over reciprocating the blowjob. Shaking his head, he sighed.
— Mar 10, 2023 05:51PM
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It was just that for Max, everything was about coercion and power, and going down on him now, stone-cold sober as he was, would be taken as some twisted victory over him, and Crane couldn’t afford to lose what tiny bit of control he still had in their relationship.
— Mar 10, 2023 05:49PM
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He wasn’t even angry or averse to sucking Max’s dick. Not anymore, anyway. They were well past that, and even Crane had to admit his continued shows of resistance towards actively participating in certain things were starting to seem . . . forced.
— Mar 10, 2023 05:48PM
