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Kelly
is 70% done
“Hadn’t it not been …” instead of Had it not been for…. Did they use an editor at all? Each chapter is filled with mistakes like this. Not only that, but the sentence structures are so off… it takes you out of the story. It’s a good story but these mistakes are just ruining it.
— Mar 13, 2023 08:11PM
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Kelly
is 43% done
This is no bad but there are so many editing errors such as words left out of sentences (“… his course was set toward the waiting by the stables.” Instead toward the girl waiting by the stables and the story is full of this type of thing). Also suddenly, have way through the book there is a new voice. Brax has his own chapter? That is just strange to add the the voices of the story half way through.
— Mar 13, 2023 07:55AM
