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Genre-wise this feels closer to Winter's Orbit, in that the romantic elements are merely present rather than primary, with the sci-fi elements and politics forefront. Well, less aristocratic politics and more smuggling revolutionary politics. I find myself slowing down a bit in this section though, because after finally having the characters figure things out, tension has dissipated on both fronts.
— Mar 25, 2023 05:58PM
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Mel
is on page 229 of 392
Generally having a good time, so hate to nitpick, but I can't help myself. Must... correct... grammar.
"But we can't attract that kind of numbers."
Those. Those! I don't think I've ever seen this particular variety of grammatical disagreement. With a demonstrative adjective? Is that a thing now?
— Mar 25, 2023 11:01AM
"But we can't attract that kind of numbers."
Those. Those! I don't think I've ever seen this particular variety of grammatical disagreement. With a demonstrative adjective? Is that a thing now?
