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…sequence each other at a perfect timing so neither of the parts would feel like it’s dragging was AMAZING
— Mar 26, 2023 12:32AM
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Elvira
is 99% done
It was great! The aliens used semagraphic way of writing and reading this story felt like a semagram itself. The story Louse tells to her daughter, the way it ends where it’s starts, the writing style (he used quite a bit of linguistic and physics jargon but in a very understandable way without making characters sound dumb) and how after a block of text in the alien story and story of her daughters life sequence..
— Mar 26, 2023 12:31AM
