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Jennifer
is on page 22 of 386
OY. I can tell this book is going to be a beaut. How many heavy topics can we introduce in the first 25 pages? let’s see… surgeon has just watched a child die from his sibling shooting him, Lily has a father who abused the mother, she just came from his funeral where she gave a bad eulogy, Lily probably got raped by a homeless guy named Atlas, and the doctor she just met has already mentioned having sex with her
— Mar 26, 2023 09:43AM
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Jennifer
is on page 42 of 386
OK, WTF does “careened my head around them” mean? That doesn’t make any sense! This book is just ticking me off with terrible writing and vocabulary.
I rolled my eyes at “the underneath of my bra”, and “the piercing of a ring rips through the air”, but how in the hell does she careen her head around some shelves?
— Mar 26, 2023 02:35PM
I rolled my eyes at “the underneath of my bra”, and “the piercing of a ring rips through the air”, but how in the hell does she careen her head around some shelves?
Jennifer
is on page 22 of 386
And lets throw in the We’re all just people and there are no good and bad people, just people who do things that are bad sometimes trope. Uh, I reject that premise that there are no good and bad people. Hitler was evil. Stalin, same. I don’t think anyone is born evil, but if you do wicked, evil things, sorry, you’re evil. So I’m rolling my eyes a bit already.
— Mar 26, 2023 09:45AM
Jennifer
is on page 16 of 386
Only 16 pages in and already feeling regret. The character names are beyond ridiculous and the main character is kind of annoying to me already. Well, let’s see how far I get. She makes incomplete sentences that start with “But” a lot and maybe that is part of my annoyance.
— Mar 25, 2023 07:06PM
