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Ehhhh I think this concept is wholly ruined by making it a magic school situation. I think the core idea here is good, with the whole afterlife immortals etc., but this is incredibly juvenile and the mistakes with word choice/typos/punctuation are really distracting, not that there’s much to be distracted from
— Mar 29, 2023 08:05AM
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shark
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This is… not good so far. Interesting concept but the execution is pretty bad and juvenile.
— Mar 28, 2023 09:11AM
