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Oof, huge anachronism. 😖
Apr 04, 2023 04:21PM
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"He shakes his head, then strokes his beard."

Wait a second. This guy, one of the main suspects, has been on page how many times — let's just say a lot, because the MC lives in the same house as him — and now, 3/4 of the way through, we're being told for the first time that he has a beard?

Not to mention, it's 1952? And he's a businessman, in fact basically a CEO? Uhhhhh.... I'm gonna say no. What a weird glitch.
Apr 10, 2023 03:58PM
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Teal
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Don't know what I'm going to do now. DNF? Skip ahead? Wait a few days (can't wait too long, it's a library book) then push myself to continue? There's a reason why I don't read books about queer characters in the 1950s, but I went against my usual judgement in order to give this a chance. I'm invested enough in the mystery now that I don't really want to DNF... but I don't know if I can bear to keep reading, either.
Apr 09, 2023 08:47PM
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Daniel What?


Teal In a book set in 1952, addressing a woman as Ms. Gold.

Maybe it only seems huge to me. But I remember conservative America pitching a collective hissy fit in the 70s over the brand-new innovation of 'Ms.' "How do you even pronounce that?" said as snidely and contemptuously as possible, with utter disbelief that they were being asked to address others in a way different from how they'd done it before. Refer to people differently, simply because they were being asked to, as a courtesy...?! Cue the mockery! Perish the thought! Think of the children!

In other words, it was very much like the current-day hissy-fitting over pronouns.


Daniel It didn't even occur to me. That's the horror of writing historical, you've basically got to research every single word you use, ugh. Wikipedia says it's actually much older, 17th century, and there were multiple attempts to revive it in the 20th before the 70s. I expect a lot of the 70s nonsense was because it became associated with feminism. If anybody was using it in the 50s a jewish bisexual nightclub owner is probably as good a candidate as any. :)


Drianne I remember seeing that and being like, "Oh dear, lol, no."


Teal Drianne wrote: "I remember seeing that and being like, "Oh dear, lol, no.""

I'm hoping there aren't going to be any more mistakes like that. 🤞🏼


Mimi Wow, sharp eyes. I'm currently reading this book too and I passed over this part not even a day ago unawares lol.


Teal Mimi wrote: "Wow, sharp eyes. I'm currently reading this book too and I passed over this part not even a day ago unawares lol."

Oops — sorry to bring it to your attention, then! Unfortunately, whenever I read historical fiction I'm hypersensitive to the presence of anachronisms. If I could turn that part of my brain off, I would. 🫤


Mimi Oh, no worries. I don't really pay attention to the actual words on the page when reading which sounds really weird, I know. It's because I "see" images instead of words. So I was picturing the Ms. in question instead of seeing the word as it appeared on the page.

It's really interesting that you catch these things off-hand like that. You'd make a great editor (if you're not one already).


Teal Mimi wrote: "It's really interesting that you catch these things off-hand like that. You'd make a great editor (if you're not one already)."

I think I would make a good editor, at least a copyeditor, because typos leap out at me as if they were printed in neon colors. If there are too many, they can drive me to dnf. 😩


Daniel Maybe I could loan you my brain's autocorrect module?


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Teal Daniel wrote: "Maybe I could loan you my brain's autocorrect module?"

That would probably crash the whole system. 🤣


Daniel I think I would be very insecure as a copyeditor, not just from fear of missing stuff, but from all the "rules" that just seem so incredibly subjective.


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Teal Whereas I love that subjectivity, because it supports the flourishing of an author's unique style. A rule-bound copyeditor can be an author's nemesis rather than a helper. KJ Charles once wrote about her experiences with a copyeditor assigned her by a publishing house, and oof — it's a relationship that can really go wrong.


Daniel In my version, client publishes their book, gets 17 angry 1 star reviews from people because of some "rule" their third grade teacher told them that I didn't even bat an eye at, and I have to change my name and move to Svalbard.

If it's my writing, then I'm like, rules? there's no rules, from who? the king of language? if the meaning the reader gets from the sentence is the one I intended, mission accomplished, stfu. But taking responsibility for it in someone elses, mmmm, no.


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