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Zachary Flye
is on page 52 of 239
At the beginning of Chap. 7
So far I'm liking it, the writing is a bit abrupt and stilted in parts and Bobby's feeling for Gabe, short for Gabriella, are a bit intense and advanced for the short amount of time he's known her, but since this is not only a stand-alone but a fairly short one at that I'm going to try and let it slide.
— Mar 23, 2015 07:11AM
So far I'm liking it, the writing is a bit abrupt and stilted in parts and Bobby's feeling for Gabe, short for Gabriella, are a bit intense and advanced for the short amount of time he's known her, but since this is not only a stand-alone but a fairly short one at that I'm going to try and let it slide.
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Zachary Flye
is on page 202 of 239
Beginning of Chap. 25
So, I'm nearly done and what began as a possible 3 star book I think will probably end up getting 4.5 stars unless something happens in the next 40 pages to change my mind. Even though the writing is still a bit off, it doesn't really detract from the story and I've come to terms with Bobby's intense feelings for Gabe, I'm pretty pumped to see how this book ends!
— Mar 24, 2015 03:55AM
So, I'm nearly done and what began as a possible 3 star book I think will probably end up getting 4.5 stars unless something happens in the next 40 pages to change my mind. Even though the writing is still a bit off, it doesn't really detract from the story and I've come to terms with Bobby's intense feelings for Gabe, I'm pretty pumped to see how this book ends!
