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I decided to end the story here. It's actually a good story, but I think I'd like it best if I leave the ending a mystery.

The author's usage of seamless interswitching between Toby talking to people and Owen is an interesting thing. Is it supposed to indicate that, to Toby, Owen is as normal to him as a human?

I did not expect this direction. The author is doing a great job making me sympathize with Toby, his isolation and loneliness, and his deteriorating state of mind.

Well, not worst case scenario but up there. Wondering how the story will go from here.

There just seems so much wrong with introducing your girlfriend to the sasquatch-like monster living in the forest. That you fed two people too.

So much so that probably the most unexpected outcome is for everything to turn out well. In twist, that might be exactly what happens.

Damn. Toby went from cringe loser to killer. This went from 40 to 100 real quick.