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3rd page of reading sample:
I am starting to think Creative Writing courses genuinely advice to have the whole 'character has to look into a mirror to know what they look like' in a story, even when it's 3rd person and any other way of sharing the info (maybe aside from character X telling Y what Y looks like) would do. probably better.
hope this isn't a warning sign...
— Apr 09, 2023 07:53AM
I am starting to think Creative Writing courses genuinely advice to have the whole 'character has to look into a mirror to know what they look like' in a story, even when it's 3rd person and any other way of sharing the info (maybe aside from character X telling Y what Y looks like) would do. probably better.
hope this isn't a warning sign...
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MeltingPenguins
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Dnf.
first chapter and we are starting out with grotesquely fridging... well stoving, really..., a woman who was seemingly introduced solely for that purpose.
no thanks
— Apr 09, 2023 08:17AM
first chapter and we are starting out with grotesquely fridging... well stoving, really..., a woman who was seemingly introduced solely for that purpose.
no thanks
