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James Elkins is on page 14 of 120

This fight with Titania should be max 6 pages instead of 13. Not a knock on the art BTW. I wouldn’t change pages 5 or 14. the splash page/pin-up on page 6 is okay. I think it’s supposed to be a fan-service/reveal, but it falls short in both regards. It could have easily have been a long frame on the next page and not affected the story, amount of fan-service, or the reveal.

— Apr 10, 2023 01:01PM

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James Elkins is on page 75 of 120

Silver Surfer LITERALLY went against Galactus which is how he got stuck on Earth.

— Apr 10, 2023 01:59PM

James Elkins is on page 75 of 120

Was Scott Lang Ant-Man when Jack of Hearts was alive? I thought it was Pym.

— Apr 10, 2023 01:57PM

James Elkins is on page 70 of 120

I should have mentioned this on page 49 (as Jen should have mentioned to Ben and Ben should have mentioned to the cop) Lockjaw is not a dog. He is an Inhuman and a member of their royal family. That’s why he doesn’t need a leash.

— Apr 10, 2023 01:52PM

James Elkins is on page 64 of 120

Pages 45-49 and 61-63 look like they’re by one artist and 50-61 and 64 look like someone else. Like maybe Luca Maresca who takes over penciler duties on page 65

— Apr 10, 2023 01:48PM

James Elkins is on page 50 of 120

She doesn’t know he’s no longer a powerhouse.

— Apr 10, 2023 01:41PM

James Elkins is on page 48 of 120

Frame 2. Neither of those heroes have a job. I believe one is a Queen. Janet Van Dyne works outside the home. She’s a model and fashion designer I think.

— Apr 10, 2023 01:34PM

James Elkins is on page 44 of 120

Nothing really happens here that couldn’t have happened in half the pages. Great art. Favorite page is 42, where she picks up the ambulance, cars in a line at the intersection didn’t feel like it made sense if traffic was that bad, but still a nice sequence.

— Apr 10, 2023 01:31PM

James Elkins is on page 24 of 120

— Apr 10, 2023 01:22PM

James Elkins is on page 23 of 120

I’m guessing on how the page count syncs up with the printed/digital collection as I am reading it digitally issue by issue.

— Apr 10, 2023 01:20PM

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When did dynamic, confident, fight for her innocent client become this meek thing that forgot she was something before she was She-Hulk

— Apr 10, 2023 11:32AM