James Elkins’s Reviews > She-Hulk, Vol. 1: Jen, Again > Status Update

Silver Surfer LITERALLY went against Galactus which is how he got stuck on Earth.

Was Scott Lang Ant-Man when Jack of Hearts was alive? I thought it was Pym.

I should have mentioned this on page 49 (as Jen should have mentioned to Ben and Ben should have mentioned to the cop) Lockjaw is not a dog. He is an Inhuman and a member of their royal family. That’s why he doesn’t need a leash.

Pages 45-49 and 61-63 look like they’re by one artist and 50-61 and 64 look like someone else. Like maybe Luca Maresca who takes over penciler duties on page 65

She doesn’t know he’s no longer a powerhouse.

Frame 2. Neither of those heroes have a job. I believe one is a Queen. Janet Van Dyne works outside the home. She’s a model and fashion designer I think.

Nothing really happens here that couldn’t have happened in half the pages. Great art. Favorite page is 42, where she picks up the ambulance, cars in a line at the intersection didn’t feel like it made sense if traffic was that bad, but still a nice sequence.

This fight with Titania should be max 6 pages instead of 13. Not a knock on the art BTW. I wouldn’t change pages 5 or 14. the splash page/pin-up on page 6 is okay. I think it’s supposed to be a fan-service/reveal, but it falls short in both regards. It could have easily have been a long frame on the next page and not affected the story, amount of fan-service, or the reveal.

When did dynamic, confident, fight for her innocent client become this meek thing that forgot she was something before she was She-Hulk