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Romival seems to be constantly 'smirking' or 'smug'. It's not sexy.
— Apr 17, 2023 12:06AM
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The use of the word 'smirk' in terms of the hero is so off-putting that I ran a word count for it - 46 times. 46.
— Apr 17, 2023 01:06AM
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That was glorious! Hattie and Holly overhearing Tuvo commenting on Hattie's size and then Holly's reaction and defense of her friend was epic! LOVED it. Tuvo mate, I hope your book comes soon and you have to do some serious groveling!! Better yet, I hope Hattie has a different hero and you can mope on the sidelines.
— Apr 16, 2023 09:27PM
