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Rachel
is 29% done
Twice she's been the damsel in distress. Still more grammatical errors and formatting issues.
— Apr 01, 2015 03:43PM
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Rachel
is 46% done
Timeline doesn't make sense. It was a snow storm in February, and one month later it's May?
— Apr 01, 2015 06:44PM
Rachel
is 8% done
Very cliché. Immediate attraction, electricity when they touch, getting hot and bothered over how he eats. Several small grammatical errors.
— Mar 31, 2015 06:09PM
