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Brea
is 14% done
Tella's maturity level is REALLY going to piss me off. I'm going to need some serious character development from her.... Fingers crossed. Also I really want Scarlett's POV....
— Apr 20, 2023 04:33PM
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Brea
is 62% done
So I've been trying to figure out why I'm just not enjoying this.... it's because I'm not a fan of the writing style. The author tries way too hard to make her writing feel "lyrical". I noticed it a bit in the first book, but Scarlett was a way more likeable character. Tella is annoying. Very annoying. Also, the narrator is not my favorite. Sometimes the tone she uses for different scenes feels off. More to come.
— Apr 25, 2023 08:45AM
