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Then the assistant to the female protagonist tells her “Mr. Ross called”, and she instantly knows who it is, even though she hasn’t communicated with him in years. And the assistant doesn’t know about him, so it should have been “a Mr. Ross called”. Just clunky writing.
— Apr 23, 2023 10:21AM
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Yikes. The writing is awkward. The CEO of a billion dollar business refers to the CFO as “Mr. Davis”, but everyone else by their first names. Not even “Charles Davis”. That’s weird and awkward. Is he still a child?
— Apr 23, 2023 10:21AM

